Now, I will go through the details of our Language Arts curricula, starting with writing. It's funny to me that I want to begin with writing. Growing up, I saw writing as a chore to be avoided. It was definitely the last thing I wanted to do. Math and science were easy, with a certain path to take to find one particular answer. Grammar was easy because it was also clear. But, writing was this foggy area where you put words on paper and in the end had no idea how it would be received. I could cling to a few hard-and-fast rules, such as use correct spelling and grammar (commas were always a bit blurry), organize your writing, be concise (but be sure to meet your assigned word count). I could usually count on a decent grade following these rules, but I always knew there was something that made writing
good, but I never knew what that something was. You either got it, or you didn't. And, I believed that I was one who didn't "get it".
Once in my high school AP English class (I was signed up for this by a teacher - I really DID NOT want to take it), we had an in-class essay on a poem. Poetry was another painful experience as a student. Combine that with writing, and I was in agony. We had to analyze a poem in writing. I had NO clue what I was supposed to write about. I was almost in tears about halfway through the allotted time with nothing written down. I was hating the day I ever agreed to take this class. I definitely hated all poetry and writing. However, I knew that writing
something would be better than nothing. Even though the only things I could think of seemed so obvious that a 2nd grader could have written them, I knew that getting a 50 on this paper would be better than a zero. So, I wrote.
Fast forward to the next class when the teacher gave the papers back. Before giving them back, he proceeded to tell us that they were less-than-impressive. There was one paper he said was good that he wanted to read to the class. Much to my horror, he read my paper. This didn't teach me to think that I was a good writer, but rather that it was a joke. There was no rhyme or reason to it, it was basically a waste of time, and my hatred of it was only re-enforced. I loved reading a good book, but writing about anything myself should ALWAYS be avoided if possible.
Fast forward again to my days as a homeschool teacher. Yikes! You mean I have to teach those subjects besides my favorites, i.e. science and math? I have to teach these kids
how to read (They don't just figure that out on their own??) I have to teach these kids
how to be good writers? You mean, it's possible to teach that?
Thankfully, I've run across several good sources that have helped me become a writing teacher. I've been looking for sources like these for a long time. We have used a few writing curricula with assignments that seem to promise, if your student completes these, he/she will be a good writer. The problem with these was that I was relying too much on these different curricula without possessing the overall knowledge myself. And, we had so many different curricula with kids a different levels that they were difficult to keep up with. On top of this, writing became a separate subject and then I had try to make these writing skills spread to writing in their other subjects - even more work, and remember, I didn't actually possess an overall writing knowledge myself.
I have tried
Classical Writing. That was a convoluted mess that I really wanted to make work. I had heard great things about it from those who figured it out, but I just didn't have time to make all those big books work together into something practical for us. And, there was no big picture. It had what I call, "The Trust Me" promise - complete all these books over the next six years or so and your student will be a good writer!
I have tried
Writing with Ease and
Writing with Skill by Susan Wise Bauer. Writing with Ease has copywork, dictation, and narration repeated weekly for four years at ever-more-difficult levels, but it always seemed there should be something more. Again, it was like, "Trust me! Do this same thing over and over and your child will magically know how to write paragraphs in middle school!" We did enjoy the stories that Writing with Ease used, but it just seemed like it should be part of a writing program, not a program by itself, especially after first or second grade. This past year Maria used about half of the first level of
Writing with Skill, the middle school writing program that follows
Writing with Ease. I think it was teaching good things, but it was overwhelming to me. It seemed to have so many skills in there that I couldn't keep up with them all and see that they were extended to her writing in other areas. There was no big picture, no obvious set of goals for me to follow. Maybe if I had time to read the big 'ole Teacher's Guide cover to cover instead of one lesson at a time as Maria worked through it, I could figure out a list of goals, but really I needed something simpler.
I was so happy this year to find the literature source,
Teaching the Classics. It taught me how to teach literature - any literature. So, I started thinking that there must be something out there that would help me become a writing teacher, without relying on someone else's curriculum. I started asking around and Brave Writer's
The Writer's Jungle was recommended. I got it half off through Homeschool Buyer's Coop (where their stuff is always on sale!) and read it. It was wonderful!! It was exactly what I was looking for. I now have a writing plan and goals that I can adapt to our own assignments without needing someone else's curriculum. I know how to help the kids revise their work and how to advance through different skills over time as they are ready. I love how it's an overall plan of copywork, narration, dictation, appreciation of good writing in prose and poetry, observation of nature, art, and music, quick, daring freewrites, and month-long completed writing projects. I have already seen some good things in the kids' writing since starting this. And beyond that the kids are really enjoying writing, and we are enjoying learning more about writing together. I find that whenever I discover a source that teaches me how to teach something rather than relying on separate curricula, we work together more, spending more time together, and become closer. Less individualism and more community!
Here are a few of my favorite pieces of writing by my kids that were somehow helped by what I learned in
The Writer's Jungle:
I love
this report about Benjamin Franklin by Cati. I suggested that she write an interesting opening for the report, and she asked how. So, we looked at the beginnings of some different books and talked what she thought was good and what was not. She decided she didn't like reports that just sound like a bunch of facts, so she changed the beginning so that it was more personal and story-like, and I think her writer's voice really showed. She was happy with the final product.
I also loved the wonderful descriptions Cati used in
this freewrite about her face. A freewrite is a quick 10-minute or so writing about a certain topic. It's goal is to loosen up a writer, give them something to start with so they aren't just staring at a blank piece of paper, and to take some risks with images and such. They should just write whatever comes to mind without worrying about how good it is. If we choose to turn it into a long-term project, then the gems can be saved and the whole piece revised and polished.
I love how
this writing by Maria about the book Kon-Tiki really improved. She improved the organization, clarity, and style. The original with my notes are included along with the final writing.
I also love this
writing about spinner dolphins by Matteo. He started with a couple of run-on sentences, and expanded and revised it over time and, in the end, had a interesting piece about one of his favorite subjects.
You will notice that these writing pieces related to different subjects: history, literature, and science. I love how I can use The Writer's Jungle and apply it to different areas. Writing is no longer a separate subject but used as a tool where needed. That's what writing is, a tool of communication of ideas, not an exercise for its own sake, even when you're writing creatively.
So, The Writer's Jungle will be our main source for writing next year. Next time, I will talk about a few writing supplements that I like and that work right into the Brave Writer plan.